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The past is behind
But I still feel the ripples
Disrupting my flow.
Yes, another haiku.

Written 2nd July.

For :icondeltabeta:'s contest

(expect a lot of haiku from me over the next little while. I'm not doing haikuwrimo but I just... can't stop writing haiku!)
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Given 2008-07-10
In The Past by *almalobana, the images and words are felt so strongly. It is indeed a charming addition to our wonderful Haiku month. ( Featured by LadyLincoln )
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Beautiful. We are as droplets of water in a larger pool, rippling out, chiming and effecting others.
It's melancholy of those who's ripples aren't large enough that their ebb and flow never reach or collide with anothers.
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:iconjukih:
I really like it, it's very soft
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:iconalura-the-sage:
Alura-the-Sage Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, the beauty of haiku! This is a prime example.
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:iconmisslorsta:
Beautifully said.
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:iconalmalobana:
Thank you.
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:iconvysryder000:
Vysryder000 Feb 20, 2011
thats really good! it seems we have something in common :D HAIKUS FTW!!!!!
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:icongodatesomesatan:
godatesomesatan Jul 24, 2008
!! I did not know you got a DD. Of course, if anyone's fault, it's mine. All the same. Congratulations
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:iconalmalobana:
Thank you :)

it was exciting.
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:icongodatesomesatan:
godatesomesatan Jul 25, 2008
I remember you told me you secretly always hoped for it. That's pretty awesome.
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:iconalmalobana:
Yeah I know, thanks :D

Though, y'know, just to be picky... I wish it had been on a piece I liked/was proud of, rather than a haiku. I mean haiku are fun, I just prefer my other work.

But then I'm just picky, aren't I?

Hang on, no... that just means I've got high standards. Or is that the line for when it comes to dating? I can never remember... :lol:
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